me again. phowr, you're fast to post. it felt like just yesterday i was raving about your prologue.
I really enjoyed your story. your chapters are beautifully paced, with nary a glitch in transition btw one scene to another. the witty palavers are first class, the build up, intoxicating. I'm still faning myself.
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Date: 2008-08-31 03:29 pm (UTC)me again. phowr, you're fast to post. it felt like just yesterday i was raving about your prologue.
I really enjoyed your story. your chapters are beautifully paced, with nary a glitch in transition btw one scene to another. the witty palavers are first class, the build up, intoxicating. I'm still faning myself.
thank you for sharing your talent with the world.