Wait, what? End? How can it end now?! This has got to be only the beginning, pleeease?
Seriously, those two sleeping together AND Jim knowing what's what could be a basis for so many awesome crime-fighting adventures. They can catch bad guys together and cure one another's emo by kissing on rooftops etc. The story could easily be a lot bigger than what you've written so far, and because so far it's been so amazing I really hope you'll tap the potential.
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Date: 2008-09-01 06:28 am (UTC)Seriously, those two sleeping together AND Jim knowing what's what could be a basis for so many awesome crime-fighting adventures. They can catch bad guys together and cure one another's emo by kissing on rooftops etc. The story could easily be a lot bigger than what you've written so far, and because so far it's been so amazing I really hope you'll tap the potential.