I loved this! Thanks again so much, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
It's so sad that Barbara died, and Gordon refusing to sleep in their bed without her breaks my heart. The children's reaction to her loss are also very painful, especially since Jimmy is so plainly distraught and it's obvious that Babs bottling it up inside is only going to make things worse.
It's a good thing the three of them aren't alone during all this. I especially love the last couple of lines, when Gordon finds out just what it was that Bruce had said to Babs. And that there's going to be a certain someone who will look after the commissioner. Repaying old debts, indeed!
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Date: 2008-11-19 02:35 am (UTC)It's so sad that Barbara died, and Gordon refusing to sleep in their bed without her breaks my heart. The children's reaction to her loss are also very painful, especially since Jimmy is so plainly distraught and it's obvious that Babs bottling it up inside is only going to make things worse.
It's a good thing the three of them aren't alone during all this. I especially love the last couple of lines, when Gordon finds out just what it was that Bruce had said to Babs. And that there's going to be a certain someone who will look after the commissioner. Repaying old debts, indeed!