This was an incredibly well balanced chapter. Both emotionally, in terms of the dynamics of Barbara and Jim's relationship, and in terms of character driven bits and plot driven bits.
I also enjoyed reading it, but I was particularly impressed by how well balanced the emotional stuff was. :-)
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Date: 2009-04-30 05:44 am (UTC)I also enjoyed reading it, but I was particularly impressed by how well balanced the emotional stuff was. :-)