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Title: Night Lights (chapter four)
Pairing: Gordon/Batman, eventually.
Rating: PG for now, will go higher in later parts.
A/N: Yes, second chapter today, don't get too used to this, it won't last. I have a cold, and this always fuels my writing :)
Thank you for all reading and commenting, each piece of feedback brightens my day.

prologue part one part two part three




When Gordon woke up, Batman was, predictably, gone. He had even gone to the lengths of cleaning up the supplies from the coffee table and placing them back in the first aid kit. It felt really surreal, the Batman cleaning at his house. Not one of the things he had expected to take place during this week. Or ever.

By the time he got to the office, the entire night felt just as surreal; as if it happened to someone else, or as if he dreamt it.

But the reports arriving at his desk from the previous night begged to differ, detailing the proceedings, the details, and most importantly, the cost of the entire operation. He sighed, wondering if this was what he was going to be dealing with now: and if so, was it too late to return the whole promotion thing to the shop? Probably. Damn it.

He made a large pot of coffee to get him through the day and started on the forms and reports, one piece at a time.

By the time he had made enough progress to actually see his desk again under the papers, his phone rang, and he spent a frantic thirty seconds looking for it. "Gordon."

"It seems you made quite an impression yesterday, Jim," the Mayor said pleasantly, and Gordon cringed. Which part was he referring to, and how much trouble was he in already?

"Sir?"

"I'm having lunch today with one of my most generous benefactors, and your presence has been requested," the Mayor continued, and Gordon pushed his glasses up his nose in frustration. Just wonderful, exactly what had been missing in his life. It couldn't possibly get worse. "If you could join us in an hour at the Ritz?" Oh. It could.

He assured the Mayor he'd be there with all the enthusiasm of someone on a death row, and disconnected. The day was shaping up to be worse than the previous night, and that was an achievement.

A little less than an hour later, he was led to the Mayor's table at the Ritz by a concierge whose tie probably cost more than Gordon's entire suit, and wishing for a major shoot out downtown. He would take an armed robbery. Or a plain old murder, if it was close enough that he could claim being in the neighbourhood.

"Ah, Gordon," the Mayor said, rising and extending his hand to greet him. "You know Mr Wayne, don't you?"

Jim nodded, and shook Wayne's hand as well as the man smiled widely. "We've met," he said curtly, and then remembered to add, "How do you do, Mr Wayne?"

"Bruce. Please," Wayne smiled even wider. Should be physically impossible, in Gordon's honest opinion.

As they sat down, the Mayor's cellphone beeped, and he excused himself, making a quick conversation before looking at them with dismay. "I'm dreadfully sorry, Mr Wayne, Gordon, but it seems that duty calls." He didn't explain anything else, not that Gordon needed the explanation. He had a sneaking suspicion that he had been set up, but whatever for, he had no idea.

Bruce watched the Mayor walk away, then turned back to Gordon. "Well that's unfortunate. But let's not let it spoil the lunch; why don't we order?" Jim hesitated, wondering whether the price of a lunch in the Ritz actually exceeded his weekly income or just came close to it, when Bruce added, "The least I can do after dragging you here is treat you to lunch."

Gordon glanced up, surprised. In his experience, Bruce Wayne wasn't really all that perceptive. And that was putting it mildly. "Thank you," he nodded, and leant back in his chair a little. "And, if I may ask, why did you drag me here?"

"Well, I was watching TV yesterday," Bruce announced, and Gordon held back an eyeroll. Patience. Patience was an important virtue.

"That's astounding," he said, and got a look he couldn't quite decipher, but could have been amusement. Strange.

"Isn't it?" Bruce agreed. "And there was some crime show on, don't ask me what it was," he paused as a waiter approached and placed an order without looking at the menu. The waiter turned to Gordon expectantly.

"Same," Gordon said quickly. He didn't trust the menus anyway: nothing that came with that much gold font could be trusted. "And?" he prompted Wayne, who smiled again.

"And I thought they had really fantastic equipment. All those 3D pictures of dead brains? Amazing." Something about the tone intrigued Gordon. It was almost too flighty, too clueless. "And then I thought I remembered you talking about the new CSI lab at the party," he continued, launching into what was shaping up to be a generous donation from Wayne Enterprises to the Gotham PD. For some reason.

"All of that from watching late night tv?" Gordon asked after about three minutes of one of the strangest conversations he ever had, and that included the ones with both Batman and the Joker. "Tell me, Mr Wayne, what happens when you watch Baywatch?"

Bruce made a dismissive gesture with his hand, shifting in his chair with a tense grimace. Probably didn't like Baywatch, Gordon thought. "Please, Baywatch was cancelled years ago," he offered with a smile that again sent Gordon's mind wandering.

The trouble with Bruce Wayne was, he thought later as the man was getting into another one of the flashy cars made for greater speed that could ever be reached in a city limits, the trouble with him was that you couldn't actually tell if he was having the greatest joke at your expense, or if he was actually that shallow.

Then Bruce turned to look at him, and the smile was different again, softer. The trouble with Bruce Wayne, Gordon thought, shifting uncomfortably, was something else too.


part five

Date: 2008-08-26 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natalitha.livejournal.com
yay setup lunches are the best this really can go somewhere fast... hope so ;-) keep up the wonderful writing and to again see another chapter up soon!

Date: 2008-08-26 08:06 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (Default)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I am having great fun writing this, so the next part should definitely be up tomorrow :)

Date: 2008-08-26 08:00 pm (UTC)
girlupnorth: (batman: pretty face)
From: [personal profile] girlupnorth
Oh Bruce. ♥ "And I thought they had really fantastic equipment. All those 3D pictures of dead brains? Amazing.", heee.

Um, that is to say, I'm reading every chapter and I'm more and more in love with your story. Your Gordon rocks, and I love each and every glimpse of Bruce. (the trouble with him was that you couldn't actually tell if he was having the greatest joke at your expense, or was he actually that shallow - indeed.)

Date: 2008-08-26 08:06 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Bruce: totes trufax)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Hee. I'm so glad you're reading, and enjoying XD.

Date: 2008-08-26 08:09 pm (UTC)
girlupnorth: (batman: a little angsty today)
From: [personal profile] girlupnorth
Now Bruce should totally watch a show about computer nerds in a small Eastern European country and decide that Help Is In Order, y/y?

Date: 2008-08-27 05:51 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Y.

Wait, *is* there such a show? There should be, imho. XD

Date: 2008-08-26 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-summoning-d.livejournal.com
Yay! Brilliant chapter :) I'll have the beta-ed version with you soon. Promise.

Date: 2008-08-26 08:12 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: heart of storm)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
As long as there's no glaring errors, I will wait patiently XD. And thanks :)

Date: 2008-08-26 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pellamerethiel.livejournal.com
Omg, Bruce!!!!!!!!11 Let me say... Bruce!!!!11 <3333

Yes, I'm that shallow.

The lunch set up was brilliant and I squeeed long before it, because I was sure that Bruce had to be that guy at Ritz ;) And he was talking about tv and tv shows, heee! And he was smiling *__*

Wonderful story! Keep writing, please ;D

He assured the Mayor he'll be there, with all the enthusiasm of someone on a death row, and disconnected. The day was shaping up to be worse than the previous night, and this was an achievement
Loved it.

"Well, I was watching TV yesterday," Bruce announced, and Gordon held back an eyeroll. Patience. Patience was an important virtue.
Can imagine him thinking that, pretty brilliant.

"And I thought they had really fantastic equipment. All those 3D pictures of dead brains? Amazing."
Bones?? XDDDD

Date: 2008-08-26 08:43 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (CSI:NY: Lindsay: I ROCK)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
CSI:NY. Probably. XD

Date: 2008-08-26 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kubis.livejournal.com
The trouble with Bruce Wayne, Gordon thought, shifting uncomfortably, was something else, too.
YES! :D

Vision of Batman cleaning up Gordon's house cracks me up. And, well, you know what I think about Bruce watching a crime show... XD

Date: 2008-08-26 08:43 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Bruce: totes trufax)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Batman cleaning up is a thing of joy XD

Date: 2008-08-26 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brushed-velvet.livejournal.com
Wheeee!!! Batman/Gordon last chapter and now Bruce/Gordon this chapter. Yummy!

The Baywatch question and response were great! The only line that felt slightly out of place for me was Gordon's reply to Bruce saying he'd been watching tv. It just feels a little too quick and cutting for Jim in my head.

But anyway, this fic is full of deliciousness! Looking forward to more.

Date: 2008-08-26 08:44 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Badass like it's going out)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
I think he's just having a very crappy day after a very annoying night. But you're right, I need to watch it XD

I think it's shaping up into a Bruce/Gordon/Batman triangle, which amuses me no end :D

Date: 2008-08-27 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wyliepup.livejournal.com
I am loving this chapter and story so far. And if the story turns into a Bruce/Gordon/Batman triangle...well, that could have one hell of a twist for poor old Gordon.
Can't wait for tomorrow's update!

Date: 2008-08-27 05:50 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: not amused)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Gordon is really not amused with me, and all that I'm having him go through. I hope he's happy again by the time the story comes to an end :D

Thank you for reading! :)

Date: 2008-08-26 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bionic.livejournal.com
Woo!! Still loving this so much. I love their conversations heh. Bruce is a master at deflection :D

Date: 2008-08-27 05:39 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Bruce: totes trufax)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Well, he has to be, right? :D Thank you so much :)

Date: 2008-08-26 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenachan.livejournal.com
Oh! 2 in 1 day is a true present! Thank you! :)

Bruce. Please," Wayne smiled even wider. Should be physically impossible, in Gordon's honest opinion.
Loved it! Someone had to write this and you did! ^^

Aww, this time it's Bruce/Gordon beginning!
Liked how you introduce it (more than the first chapter I mean) : Gordon is definitely picked by Bruce's speech ; hope this lunch will produce some effect on the man thoughts (libido? ;).

See you in the next one! :)

Date: 2008-08-27 05:41 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: heart of storm)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Cold medicine always makes me write a lot. :D

I'm thrilled you're enjoying it, and thanks so much for commenting :)

Date: 2008-08-26 10:03 pm (UTC)
ext_87795: (The Dark Knight - Bruce smile)
From: [identity profile] juana-a.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwwwwwww!!! Bruce!!1!!1!!!!1!!! Brucebrucebrucebrucecruce!!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Khhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Okay, I'm better now XD

I love any conversations with Bruce Wayne. Especially between Bruce and Gordon. Okay, maybe O love more with Alfred but still.. I love when Bruce talks with Gordon.

"And I thought they had really fantastic equipment. All those 3D pictures of dead brains? Amazing."

Bruuuuuuuce ♥

But Gordon's thoughts are fantastic too XDDD Take this one:

It felt really surreal, the Batman cleaning at his house. Not one of the things he had expected to take place during this week, or ever.

Awwwwwwwww!!!

or this one:

The trouble with Bruce Wayne was, he thought later as the man was getting into another one of the flashy cars made for greater speed that could ever be reached in a city limits, the trouble with him was that you couldn't actually tell if he was having the greatest joke at your expense, or was he actually that shallow.

Then Bruce turned to look at him, and the smile was different again, softer. The trouble with Bruce Wayne, Gordon thought, shifting uncomfortably, was something else, too.


I can't wait the next part and I'll be really miss you and your Gordon/Batman when I'll be in Warsaw.

See you on Friday (or Thursday :P)!

Edit: Okay, this is my the longest comment in English which I ever wrote. It's all your fault XDDD

Date: 2008-08-27 05:42 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon/Bruce: two of a kind)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Pfft my fault, shmault. *enables you*

I'll be missing you so much when you're gone. *hugs*

I'll try and have more Bruce/Gordon for you when you get back, eh? XD

Date: 2008-08-26 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com
*loves loves loves on fic*

I thoroughly approve of the speed at which you are posting these.

I'm looking forward to a couple more parts when I get home from work.

*looks all expectant and entitled*


Seriously, that last paragraph = AWESOMECAKES.

Date: 2008-08-27 05:44 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: in the middle of all this)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
*giggles*

I am not taking more cough syrup just to write faster. *eyes the bottle*. Not even for Bruce/Gordon. *looks at the bottle*. Hmm. ;D

But there will be a new chapter today, that I can promise :)

Date: 2008-08-27 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com
*stretches*

*casually looks at clock*

Wow, has it been 13 hours already?


(I'm yanking your chain now)

Date: 2008-08-27 11:46 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: srs business like srsly)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Oh, I've figured ;D

I am writing, though :)

Date: 2008-08-26 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musingme.livejournal.com
I just start reading this fic (I've been putting it off for some reason...probably because I'm an idiot lol) And it's totally brilliant.

Date: 2008-08-27 05:45 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon/Bruce/Harvey: OT3 like woah.)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
I *never* read WIPs, so I don't blame you XD. (Well, almost never.)

Thank you for reading, and so much thanks for commenting :)

This is getting me deeper in fascination....^-^

Date: 2008-08-27 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahala-ac.livejournal.com
*Ringing the bells on my toes a little more loudly* This creeps right into you, and won't let go! Bravo! *claps* *~^-^~*

Date: 2008-08-27 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solaras.livejournal.com
Bruce and Gordon's whole conversation is awesome and omg Baywatch lol.
And of course Bruce eats at the Ritz ;)

Date: 2008-08-27 05:47 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Oh, I stole that part from you, clearly.

I think I'm building my personal fanon for this ship from the fics I've read.

(and also, I live in Poland. I know nothing of eating out in States, apart from what I learn from tv and fics :D)

Thank you so much for reading :)

Date: 2008-08-27 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
If Bruce eating at the Ritz becomes fanon, that would just make my day. lol

Date: 2008-08-27 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solaras.livejournal.com
Didn't realise I wasn't still logged in :P

Date: 2008-08-27 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girl-on-moon.livejournal.com
YES. Oh, YES.

I really, really am enjoying this fic of yours. You write them so well, and it's all chocked full of wit and passion. I look forward to more. Keep up the stellar work!

Date: 2008-08-27 05:48 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: never lose faith)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, for reading, and commenting. I'm thrilled you're enjoying it :))

Date: 2008-08-27 08:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] le-mru.livejournal.com
"All of that from watching late night tv?" Gordon asked after about three minutes of one of the strangest conversations he ever had, and that included the ones with both Batman and the Joker. "Tell me, Mr Wayne, what happens when you watch Baywatch?"

Fantastyczny akapit. :D Bardzo podoba mi się i Gordon, i Bruce/Batman w Twojej charakteryzacji - obaj zachowują właśnie taki wry humor :D Który często rozładowuje sytuację. No i lunch mistrzowski, uśmiałam się.

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