noelia_g: (BM: Gordon/Bruce: sometimes it's only)
[personal profile] noelia_g
Title: Night Lights (chapter twelve)
Pairing: Gordon/Batman, eventually.
Rating: NC-17
previous parts






Bruce moved away, the flustered arousal giving way to surprise and worry. Slowly, he withdrew his hand and brushed it absently against his pants. "How..." he started, stopping when Jim slowly reached to run his fingers down the side of his face, tracing his jaw.

Then Gordon chuckled. "At least it explains the diamonds."

"What?"

"For the trap. Batman might not have any lying around, but Bruce Wayne surely does," Gordon explained matter-of-factly, causing Bruce to roll his eyes.

"You discover my secret identity, and this is what you choose to concentrate on?" he asked, shaking his head. "Really."

Gordon shrugged, his hand sliding down Bruce's neck, his attention fixed on getting the buttons of his shirt undone methodically. "If you preferred me to react differently, you shouldn't have made sure I had almost no coherent thoughts left."

Bruce stilled his hands, fingers tightening on his wrist. "Gordon," he said pleadingly, looking at him with so much worry Gordon couldn't keep up the nonchalant air anymore.

"I didn't want to know," he said quietly, wondering how on earth he'd got to have this very conversation with his pants open, shaking his head in bemusement. He looked up. "I never asked, and never tried to find out."

Bruce nodded, the line of his mouth tightening as his eyes darted away. "I know."

"It changes everything," Gordon muttered, and then smiled slightly. "And nothing. I trusted you before, I trust you still."

"Thank you," Bruce said quietly, and if Gordon wasn't just inches away, he probably wouldn't have caught it. Jim leaned in, his body fitting against Bruce's, covering Bruce's lips with his own, kissing him slowly and thoroughly. He traced the curve of Bruce's lips with his tongue, then, even slower, coaxing them open, waiting for the low groan deep in Bruce's throat. He returned to undoing Bruce's shirt, pushing it off his shoulders. He leaned back, simply looking at the exposed skin.

He moved forward, maneuvering Bruce towards the couch, pushing him gently down, and knelt next to him. His fingertips traced the edge of the wound in Bruce's side, the same one he had touched before, the same one he had patched up few days ago. Bruce hissed, his hips twitching, and it didn't sound like pain, it sounded... Jim moved his fingers across Bruce's stomach, then up his other side, along an older bruise, brown and yellow and faint. "For god's sake, Jim, just..." Bruce started, but the rest was swallowed as Jim kissed him again, hard and unyielding.

"What do you want?" he asked, pulling away, and for a long delightful moment Bruce just stared at him, breathing harshly.

"Anything," Bruce said finally, arching his back lightly. Jim looked at him, pretending to frown thoughtfully as his fingers idly skimmed the waistband of Bruce's pants.

"Anything sounds good," he nodded before sliding to the floor, onto his knees, spreading Bruce's legs with his hands on Bruce's thighs, his fingers working the zipper open. He hadn't done that in a long while, but quite probably, it was not something one forgot easily. And by the strained moan Bruce gave when Gordon took his cock into his mouth he hadn't lost the touch, excuse his pun.

"Jim," Bruce kept repeating his name, as Jim's fingers dug into his thighs, as his tongue traced the underside of Bruce's dick. "Jim..." the vowel drawn out as if it was supposed to last forever, voice rising to almost reach a scream.

Jim pulled away, licking his lips absently, and Bruce moaned slightly. After a moment, when his breathing evened out, and Jim moved back to the couch, Bruce smirked lightly. "I guess this would be it for the lunch?"

Gordon didn't even bother with an eyeroll. "This was terrible," he said wryly. "I think it might have been your worst, actually," he added thoughtfully.

"I do try," Bruce nodded, turning his head to look at Gordon. "If I may ask, how..." he started, and Jim sighed.

"I patched this one up," he offered, pointing at the scar.

Bruce nodded. "I must remember from now on, don't take my shirt in front of people," he said, grinning. "Good thing I wasn't planning to."

"Oh?" Gordon raised his eyebrow, and Bruce laughed, leaning in to kiss him quickly.

"Present company excepted, of course."


epilogue

Date: 2008-08-31 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kubis.livejournal.com
I actually thought that Bruce knew what he's doing when he let Jim undress him. I mean, he should have remembered the bruise thing. Stupid mistake, but well, he'll not be taking his shirt off around other people from now on ;)

I'll be sad to see this fic end, really. (and I'm still hoping for the next one ;))

Thanks for the quick update ♥

Date: 2008-08-31 10:32 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: commissioner)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Oh, I see how it could be read that way XD But I don't think he knew, I think he really forgot himself in the moment. who wouldn't?.

Yes, me too, with the sadness. But I'm definitely not leaving this pairing alone, they have taken over my brain and are apparently staying for a while XD

Date: 2008-09-01 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goat-song.livejournal.com
Wait, what? End? How can it end now?! This has got to be only the beginning, pleeease?

Seriously, those two sleeping together AND Jim knowing what's what could be a basis for so many awesome crime-fighting adventures. They can catch bad guys together and cure one another's emo by kissing on rooftops etc. The story could easily be a lot bigger than what you've written so far, and because so far it's been so amazing I really hope you'll tap the potential.

Date: 2008-09-01 06:43 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Badass like it's going out)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
There is an epilogue coming, but the fic is, sadly, ending. The story, however, is not. I do have a sequel planned, and before that, a story set during this, from Bruce's POV. :)

Those two are not letting go off their hold on my brain so easily ;)

And thank you so much for commenting :)

Date: 2008-09-01 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goat-song.livejournal.com
I do have a sequel planned

Well an end to this /installment/ is perfectly okay ;)

YAY SEQUEL!!

Thank YOU for writing and posting the story. It's been a great read :)

Date: 2008-08-31 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenachan.livejournal.com
Yay!! \o/
So Bruce didn't take it too bad, good. ;)

This was a lovely sex scene!! *g*

"I guess this would be it for the lunch?"
Gordon didn't even bother with an eyeroll. "This was terrible,"

*grin* Indeed it was!

Thank you ♥

Date: 2008-08-31 10:34 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Bruce: totes trufax)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Bruce apparently shares my love for really awful puns. *shakes head at self*. I probably could do worse. It's sad. ;D

Thank you so much for reading, and commenting :)

Date: 2008-08-31 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brushed-velvet.livejournal.com
"Present company excepted, of course."

Damn right!

"It changes everything," Gordon muttered, and then smiled slightly. "And nothing. I trusted you before, I trust you still."

Aw! *sniffles* Sums them up perfectly!

Date: 2008-08-31 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girl-on-moon.livejournal.com
This. Is. Beautiful. Wow.

You're an awesome writer. :)

Date: 2008-08-31 11:55 pm (UTC)
ext_87795: (The Dark Knight - Jim Gordon)
From: [identity profile] juana-a.livejournal.com
ondjksajnxhushvfdjsh%$#o@#kfnKSNJDFKSkndksjnd

Thanks for the best ending of this day. I didn't dream about. *loves so much*

Well, I was sure Bruce forgot about this one moment in Gordon's house. Okay, you told me about it but earlier I've been thought about it. Love this scene. All this chapter too.

And Bruce is so poor and sweet and I completly understand Gordon.

Bruce stilled his hands, fingers tightening on his wrist. "Gordon," he said pleadingly, looking at him with so much worry Gordon couldn't keep up the nonchalant air anymore.

My favourit sentence. Shortly after:

"I guess this would be it for the lunch?"

Gordon didn't even bother with an eyeroll. "This was terrible," he said wryly.


and

"Present company excepted, of course."

I love them :P And when you'll finish I will miss them.

Thanks again for posted it so quickly :***

*goes to dream about Bruce*

Date: 2008-08-31 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mia6363.livejournal.com
mmmmm fanfastic quick update! you rule! I can't wait to see your conclusion!

Date: 2008-09-01 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shaney.livejournal.com
After reading all the other comments, hmm are you ending this story soon? Because I am so enjoying it still! Anyway nice continuation of the other chapter, and I love how Gordon undresses Bruce slowly mmm.

Date: 2008-09-01 06:45 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: good cops are few)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
The fic is ending soon, yes (I'm writing this now, actually :D), but there is a sequel planned :) I'm so glad you're enjoying :)

Date: 2008-09-01 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bionic.livejournal.com
awwww... that was wonderful!

Date: 2008-09-01 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeeeeeee.


Also, the bit with Alfred was ADORABLE!!!

Date: 2008-09-01 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natalitha.livejournal.com
Wow hot loved this chappie glad that jim was cool with bruce being bats last thing bruce needs is his partner having a mental breakdown keep up the wonderful writing and hope to see another chapter up in thei series soon!

Date: 2008-09-01 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tenshi-nanashi.livejournal.com
So my reaction during the last chapter was 'man, that's hot!' and 'oooh, busted, Bruce...Soooo Busted.'
This time my reaction is still 'man, that's hot!' but I have to say the second one has changed to be more of 'awww, they're so cute together now that their on the same page.'
Good job.

This is getting me deeper in fascination....^-^

Date: 2008-09-01 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahala-ac.livejournal.com
And I think I ALWAYS will be Noelia! *contented sigh* I rate this Chappy: [STELLAR] See you in the next chapter Noelia! *BIG HUGLOMP OF ANTICIPATION* ^-~

Date: 2008-09-01 08:53 am (UTC)
girlupnorth: (bones: cellphone)
From: [personal profile] girlupnorth
"If you preferred me to react differently, you shouldn't have made sure I had almost no coherent thoughts left."

Sounds like a pretty good plan to me XD

Great couple of chapters, loved Alfred in the previous one, and the conversations between Bruce and Gordon in both - and let's not pretend that sex isn't always good and welcome ;)

Date: 2008-09-01 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] python07.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this whole thing. So awesome!

Date: 2008-09-03 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pellamerethiel.livejournal.com
Awww, poor Bruce, so aroused that he forgot about his scar :P The whole dialogue and scene seems so true, I just don't know what else to comment. :) Everything is in its right place, right.

Bruce stilled his hands, fingers tightening on his wrist. "Gordon," he said pleadingly, looking at him with so much worry Gordon couldn't keep up the nonchalant air anymore.
Awww, poor Gordon! ♥

Profile

noelia_g: (Default)
noelia_g

April 2011

S M T W T F S
     12
345 6789
10111213141516
17181920212223
24252627282930

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 28th, 2025 01:23 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios