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Title: Night Lights (chapter two)
Pairing: Gordon/Batman, eventually.
Rating: PG for now, will go higher in later parts.
Summary: In Gordon's life, everything came secondary to the city.
Dedication: for [livejournal.com profile] juana_a for handholding and for distracting :)

prologue
part one



It was almost comforting. A robbery turned hostage situation at the museum, no costumes, fear toxins, or master plans. No plans at all, and that was exactly where it had turned ugly, and a night guard was shot, two others and a curator and his assistant still inside. By the time Gordon got to the scene, it seemed like half of the police force was there already.

"What do we have?" he asked the detective in charge, and listened to the detailed answer. His gaze kept slipping from the Lieutenant's face, however, turning above. Batman would be insane to show up here today, with that many officers who'd shoot him first and never really get to the questions part, and yet, for some reason Gordon couldn't help but look into the shadows on the rooftops, trying to make out their shapes.

"Orders, sir?" the lieutenant asked, and Gordon turned his attention to the task at hand. They've worked out a decent plan, one that should work.

It would have worked, probably, if one of the hostage guards didn't try for heroics, didn't lunge for one of the guns. The resounding sound of the gunshot was all the SWAT team needed to enter, and from then on, it was pure chaos, dozens of voices over the radio, gasps and screams from the crowd gathered behind the yellow tape, and a cloud of smoke from the tear gas obscuring everything going on in the building itself.

And then someone, maybe one of Gordon's men, maybe a bystander, had yelled 'Batman', and everything went quiet and still for Jim, as a shadow glided above them, then swept into the building through a broken window.

Without much thought, Gordon broke into a run, knowing he won't be the only one, but in all possibility, he will be the only one not going to shoot to kill.

They found two of the hostages in the main hall, the guard, on the floor in a puddle of blood, and the curator's assistant, panicking, and yet trying his best to stop the guard from bleeding out. Gordon called in the paramedics as one of the officers knelt down to help, and continued towards the commotion in the back. The SWAT team were making their way from the floor above, accompanied by more sounds of gunfire. By the time Gordon made his way through the smoke, the officers were escorting hostages out, the criminals either unconscious or restrained.

"Where's the Batman?" Gordon asked, and tried to cover the worry in his voice by annoyance. He managed quite well, mostly by being furious as hell.

"Don't know, commissioner," the team's leader shrugged, taking his goggles off. "He was here, for sure," he muttered, glancing at the restrained assailants. The bat-shaped edge sticking out of the wall next to one's head was surely a dead giveaway. Gordon was pleased that apparently his officers weren't completely dense. Unlike some other people, not to name names. "We're still looking."

Gordon nodded, looking around the exhibit hall. "Good. Get them out. Have the scene secured. I will..." he stopped, and pointed outside the window. "There. Rooftop. Get him before he runs away again," he barked, and the officer just glanced, before reaching for his weapon.

"Batman?" he asked, already gesturing at his men. "Sir, are you..."

"Yes. I'll be fine, go," he ordered, and watched them spill out of the room, the messages already flying through the comms.

He paused, waiting.

"I'm not that easy to spot," came the expected rasp, and Gordon rolled his eyes.

"Well, I had a lot of practice, what with you always disappearing into the shadows," he offered, making his way towards a mural, and pushing himself through the small space between it and the real wall. "How bad is it?" he asked, looking down at the Batman, sitting on the floor, hand almost casually covering a tear in the suit.

"I had worse," the man offered, and Gordon rolled his eyes. "One of your officers is a very good shot."

"Yes, I'll make sure to promote them. Now, can you stand?"

There was a brief moment of silence, as they looked at one another. Then, "Probably not on my own."

Gordon quelled the desire to tell Batman off for being an idiot. One probably doesn't tell such things to a masked vigilante. Even if one would really like to. He paused.

"Tell me you have a new car," he muttered, but the Batman just tilted his head. "Bike outside?" And again silence. "If you tell me you came here by cab, I'm going to shoot you myself."

"I walked. Ran," a little more breathless now, and Gordon frowned with concern. "It seemed like..." he paused, taking a breath, and Gordon moved forward, reaching for him.

"Come on, we need to get you out of here, before others get back."

This night was really working up to being a long one.


part three

Date: 2008-08-25 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kubis.livejournal.com
Wow, it's looking great, really. I love Gordon's inner voice, sarcasm and irony, always very welcome.

"What do we have?" he asked the detective in charge, and listens to the detailed answer.
It should be "listened", maybe?

Btw, my brain came up today with the first sentence of Bruce POV of the Bruce/Gordon Fic Which Will Never Be Written:
The first time when he almost had an erection (thank Lord for 'almost') because of Jom Gordon in suit, was, well, really, really *awkward*.

Date: 2008-08-25 05:57 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
It should be. I was writing it throughout the day, and editing, and every time I went back, I switched tenses XD. I'm correcting all the mistakes now. XD

Also, HEE. You should write it, btw :P

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Date: 2008-08-25 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-summoning-d.livejournal.com
Gordon quelled the desire to tell Batman off for being an idiot. One probably doesn't tell such things to a masked vigilante. Even if one would really liked to. He paused.

"Tell me you have a new car," he muttered, but the Batman just tilted his head. "Bike outside?" And again silence. "If you tell me you came here by cab, I'm going to shoot you myself."


That's probably the best thing I've read all day XD Fantastic!

Date: 2008-08-25 05:59 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this, so I'm especially thrilled you liked it :)

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Date: 2008-08-25 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eclecticreality.livejournal.com
Aw, I seriously love all the Gordon taking care of Batman so far in this story. :3 Gordon's characterization is excellent, and you could definitely feel the stress and heightened frenzy when the chaos broke loose. Lovely job. I'm really looking forward to more of this story! :D

Date: 2008-08-25 06:00 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Badass like it's going out)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I'm so happy the scene worked, me and action scenes... well, I don't really write action scenes :D.

Date: 2008-08-25 06:20 pm (UTC)
ext_87795: (The Dark Knight - Gordon)
From: [identity profile] juana-a.livejournal.com
First of all... Thaaaaank you sooooo much for dedication! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Second, it was awesome. Gordon is fantastic. His sarcasm and his irony, gosh, I love it.

And this:

"Tell me you have a new car," he muttered, but the Batman just tilted his head. "Bike outside?" And again silence. "If you tell me you came here by cab, I'm going to shoot you myself."

"I walked. Run,"


It's all Jim Gordon. I can't wait next chapter.

Date: 2008-08-25 06:23 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
You deserved it, for all things you listen to, from me XD.

I can't wait for the next chapter, too. Oh, what? I have to go write it? Right. On it.

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Date: 2008-08-25 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natalitha.livejournal.com
wow another awsome chapter loved the wholed jim takes care of bruce very cool keep up the wonderful writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon!

Date: 2008-08-25 08:54 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Harvey Dent: I still believe)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, for reading and commenting :) Next chapter will be up sometime tomorrow :)

Date: 2008-08-25 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snapini.livejournal.com
"Tell me you have a new car," he muttered, but the Batman just tilted his head. "Bike outside?" And again silence. "If you tell me you came here by cab, I'm going to shoot you myself."

Hee, I loved that part!
I only just found this fic, I nearly missed it, but I'm glad I didn't! Looking forward to more, I'm really enjoying it so far. I just can't get enough of Batman/Gordon!

Date: 2008-08-25 08:55 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: good cops are few)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Neither can I, they're absolutely my new favourite pairing :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, more coming soon (tomorrow :)). Thank you for commenting :)

LOVE this SOOOO much! ^-~

Date: 2008-08-25 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahala-ac.livejournal.com
This was quite welcome to my palate! *BIG HUG* I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chappy with bells on and ringing! ^-~

Re: LOVE this SOOOO much! ^-~

Date: 2008-08-25 08:56 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: heart of storm)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2008-08-25 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ragdoll987.livejournal.com
I'm loving the consistent updates; nothing better than logging on in the morning to a new chapter in this great story. :) Having a lot of fun seeing Gordon interact with not only Bruce, but Batman! What the readers know versus what Gordon knows is just too entertaining for words! Looking forward to more.

Date: 2008-08-25 09:13 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Lol, due to the time difference, whenever I wake up, I have your update to see, which is kind of great :D

I think the whole double identity is one of the major advantages of this pairing for me, it's just so fun to play with that :)

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

Date: 2008-08-25 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenachan.livejournal.com
Update!
Aw, things are getting wilder! I love the perspective of Gordon helping the Bat escaping...

Loved the cab line!
Plus we got Gordon, action team ready to shoot, a bit of panic.
Great! :)

Date: 2008-08-25 09:39 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Badass like it's going out)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
I kind of love action!Gordon. I'm thrilled you're enjoying it, thank you :)

Date: 2008-08-25 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bionic.livejournal.com
hehehe! I love the Gordon/Batman interaction - just the right amount of dry humor. They totally understand each other xD Now to get Batman stitched up... Can't wait for more!

Date: 2008-08-25 10:39 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: not amused)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you're enjoying it :) More coming up soon, possibly with more snark as Gordon is just Not Very Happy about it all. XD

Date: 2008-08-25 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brushed-velvet.livejournal.com
The cab line from Gordon is just pure gold!

Did Gordon actually see Batman in the museum or did he sense him there?

Hmmm, I'm assuming the nameless dense person Gordon was thinking about was Bruce? I wonder if/when he'll be revising that particular opinion? :)

Date: 2008-08-25 10:38 pm (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Bruce: totes trufax)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you, I liked the cab line myself, if I may says so ;)

I'm not entirely sure, he did look around, so he might have caught the sight, but I'm going for sensed. Or suspected that Batman was there. And I think the dense person was Batman, for showing up at the hostage situation. Possibly. I'm just relating what Gordon says, and not arguing with the voice in my head. I found it's better that way ;)

Date: 2008-08-26 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melccb.livejournal.com
These Gordon/Batman fics make me so happy.
but that line.."If you tell me you came here by cab, I'm going to shoot you myself."... was hilarious!

btw i have a request for a story. I would write it myself but I think you would do a better job.
It's a heavy heavy angst fic featuring bruce/rachel/harvey


Date: 2008-08-26 05:48 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon/Bruce/Harvey: OT3 like woah.)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for commenting :)

I'll see what I can do about the request, once I'm done with my current queue of WIPs, ficathons, and requests :D

Date: 2008-08-26 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girl-on-moon.livejournal.com
I adore your Gordon, his sarcasm, and all there is to him.

"Tell me you have a new car," he muttered, but the Batman just tilted his head. "Bike outside?" And again silence. "If you tell me you came here by cab, I'm going to shoot you myself."

I laughed out loud at this! Well done! Hoping for more soon! :)

Date: 2008-08-26 05:49 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: commissioner)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you! I adore Gordon in general, so I'm glad people like my take on him :)

Date: 2008-08-26 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wyliepup.livejournal.com
Yay! Interaction between the Bat and Gordon! Really looking forward to the next chapter!

Date: 2008-08-26 05:50 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon/Bruce: sometimes it's only)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading :) Next chapter coming up soon. :)

Date: 2008-08-26 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweetphaex.livejournal.com
Ooh! SO good!

Date: 2008-08-26 09:01 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: good cops are few)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2008-08-26 09:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com
This is great! Looking forward to the next part :)

Date: 2008-08-26 09:02 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: Commissioner Awesome)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Thank you!

And also, can I steal your icon? I've been meaning to get one of a comics!Gordon, and this one is brilliant :)

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Date: 2008-08-26 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pellamerethiel.livejournal.com
Without much thought, Gordon broke into a run, knowing he won't be the only one, but in all possibility, he will be the only one not going to shoot to kill.
I loved this one! Perfect Gordon, perfect descriptions and climate. What can I say? I'm heading straight to catch the next chapter ;)

Date: 2009-02-16 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tolerik.livejournal.com
Now that I've found you (courtesy of that rec journal) I'm busy devouring every gordon/batman thing that you've written and loving all of it. (I really don't need a new fandom obsession ;)

One tiny niggle (don't be cross; I don't normally go around pointing out bits that don't quite sound right, but your stories are so good I notice more, if that makes sense?) Anyway, it was this little bit:

***"I walked. Run," a little more breathless now, and Gordon frowned with concern.***

Should it be, ***"I walked. Ran."***

Since he's talking about something he did, in the past tense.

Date: 2009-02-16 10:55 am (UTC)
ext_2619: Fred from Angel, reading a book. (BM: Gordon: something sudden like you)
From: [identity profile] noelia-g.livejournal.com
Of course it should be.

I'm awful at tenses, sometimes. I like to think I'm fairly good at English in general, as much as one can be at something that's not one's first language, but somehow, the tenses still manage to confuse me. So, corrections are greatly appreciated, if you run across something else :)

Also, I'm glad you're enjoying the fics :) (and still giddy about epic_recs, I can't stop smiling :D) Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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